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Post by Mr ~Traptz~ on Aug 12, 2008 2:26:13 GMT -5
Nuwa, here are my suggestions for the stats. It uses all 300.
Str - 60/85 Tac/Int - 85/85 Pol - 70/85 Lea - 85/85
Your second weapon does sound a little dubious though... I'll let on of the admins check it over first, but beyond that I see now glaring flaws and the like.
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Post by Nü Wa on Aug 12, 2008 13:53:14 GMT -5
hehe you guys are funny. ^_^
ok I completely understand trapz, it does kind of sound a little dubious ,I got the info from wikipedia.
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Mint
Private First Class
North Star
I said I'd never die; now I'm dead on the inside.
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Post by Mint on Aug 12, 2008 22:26:47 GMT -5
Name Mint
A.K.A North Star
Age Late teens - Mid twenties
Sex Male
Height 5'8"
Weight 135
Appearance From head to toe, Mint's appearance is immaculate; but that is what should be expected of someone apart of the Order. Starting from the top; Mint's hair is snow white, nearly silver in appearance, and extends down to his mid back area. His bangs hang loosely about his face, nearly covering his eyes completely. That in itself is nearly impossible as his eyes are a bright violet. Dark in color, but amongst the white hair, and fair complexion they really do stick out. His lips are neither thin nor full, but a perfect medium, the same could be said for his nose as well. His eyebrows are thin, and rest above eyeliner eyes. From the bottom of his eyes down to his cheeks are violet/black lines which make it seems like Mint is forever crying, but in truth he has never cried in his life. His face, generally, has a very melancholic appearance. As for the rest of his body, it's defined, but not overly muscular giving him a slender, yet strong build. His nails are neatly trimmed upon his hands, and feet: both of which are painted a dark purple.
Mint doesn't walk around naked, so let me address his apparel. He wears a solid white fitted shirt with a white jacket atop it. The jacket's sleeves are slightly longer than his arms so they stop an inch or two beyond his wrist. The jacket itself has a collar which stands up, and the jacket is extremely short; it stops exactly where his rib cage ends. Around the elbow of each sleeve of this jacket are black pieces of cloth, and up near the shoulder of the jacket are more black straps. Upon the back of jacket is a black set of wings, with two swords crossing each other; forming an 'X'. One sword is a broadsword, while the other is a katana. On the front, left side of the jacket, is a cross designed by the Order. As for pants or at least lower apparel, Mint wears a divided white hakama with a black sash; this type of hakama is also known as umanori. They stop directly at his ankles, and are very wide leg. Upon his feet Mint wears white socks with black sandals.
Weapon I Dual Magari-yari The names of these weapons are of no importance, but for the sake of future references: Heart is wielded within Mint's right hand, and Void is wielded within his left. Both measure somewhere between five and six feet.
Weapon II Dao; measures about three feet long.
Personality Mint may not be the sharpest knife in the cupboard, but his skills with a sword are said to be in a class of their own. He views his role in life as the good guy; often being chivalrous, honest, and loyal. His mind is always set upon what he wants, and he's going to do it his way or no way. Often using people to benefit himself in the world, Mint isn't exactly the greatest hero in the storybook bro. Although he gets ahead to benefit others, his means of achieving such a status are unorthodox. It's often hard to see such a plotting mind frame behind the gentle, caring, trustworthy nature of Mint; but it exist. When speaking, Mint is the formal type; often addressing strangers as sir or ma'am. Those who throw benevolent comments his way receive one in return or a humble thank you. It's quite hard to figure out the enigma that is Mint; whether he's devious or honest the guy still remains himself... which is Mint.
History Mint is a lone spearman born within the northern regions of China, and apart of a band of mercenaries known as the Holy Order. The Order itself was not created by Mint, and really it started off as a children's game between friends, but developed into something much more fierce with the winds of war sweeping across all of China. Alot is known of Mint, as he keeps nothing a secret, and is generally open with everyone. He was raised by his mother alone, since his father abandoned the family when he was two. He spent a majority of his life helping his mother with various task upon the countryside, and spent alot of time within the mountains training with wooden weapons resembling swords or spears. As for the Holy Order part of his life; ... That's a secret.
Stats Str - 85 Int - 50 Pol - 80 Lea - 85
Che. >_>
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Mr Alencon
Master Sergeant
Battle Arbiter
The Burning Sunrise
Posts: 173
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Post by Mr Alencon on Aug 13, 2008 8:13:37 GMT -5
Eh, I'm not too convinced by the very modern sounding clothes, and that dual use of spears makes me feel a bit dubious about the way you'll actually fight. Still, I suppose you'll be the one trying to swing the bloody things.
Either way, looks good to me, welcome to the site.
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Mint
Private First Class
North Star
I said I'd never die; now I'm dead on the inside.
Posts: 14
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Post by Mint on Aug 13, 2008 8:20:35 GMT -5
Eh, I'm not too convinced by the very modern sounding clothes, and that dual use of spears makes me feel a bit dubious about the way you'll actually fight. Still, I suppose you'll be the one trying to swing the bloody things. Either way, looks good to me, welcome to the site. The spear's really aren't that big at all; tis why they're as short as they are, and dual wielded. The clothes are slightly leaning more towards an SW period rather than DW, but it's merely my word choice which makes em seem more up to date. Never the less; thankyou for the approval.
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Post by Mr Wu Sheng on Aug 13, 2008 8:23:48 GMT -5
I can't help but point something out though, if they're dual weilded then they also take the spot of your 2nd weapon. I had dual weilding weapons before and i was given a limitation xD.
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Mr Alencon
Master Sergeant
Battle Arbiter
The Burning Sunrise
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Post by Mr Alencon on Aug 13, 2008 8:28:07 GMT -5
Oh, I completely missed the fact he had a second weapon. Yeah, dual wielding means you only get 1 weapon set. So yeah, you can have 1 spear and 1 sword if you like, but not 2 spears and 1 sword. And, the spears are still long, 6 foot, your character isnt even as big as that!
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Mint
Private First Class
North Star
I said I'd never die; now I'm dead on the inside.
Posts: 14
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Post by Mint on Aug 13, 2008 8:29:24 GMT -5
Fine by me. The Dao just fits the time period so I threw it in there. =pOh, I completely missed the fact he had a second weapon. Yeah, dual wielding means you only get 1 weapon set. So yeah, you can have 1 spear and 1 sword if you like, but not 2 spears and 1 sword. And, the spears are still long, 6 foot, your character isnt even as big as that! I'll make an edit for the final profile.
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Post by Shape on Aug 13, 2008 9:22:33 GMT -5
Character Details
Name: Shape
A.K.A: "South Star"
Age: ???
Sex: ???
Height: ???
Weight: ???
Appearance: Beyond Mint, no one has ever seen the /real/ Shape... and lived.
Weapon 1: I would tell you but, of course; then I’d have to kill you.
IRL.
Weapon 2: Srsly.
Personality: Who knows?
History: A powerful warrior who single-handedly crushed an entire army of men blind-folded!!!!, and with his pinky toe!!!... Shape, …is nothing short of a total enigma…
…Period.
Str - 55/85 Tac/Int - 85/85 Pol - 85/85 Lea - 85/85
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Post by Nü Wa on Aug 13, 2008 19:54:42 GMT -5
Nuwa, here are my suggestions for the stats. It uses all 300. Str - 60/85 Tac/Int - 85/85 Pol - 70/85 Lea - 85/85 Thank you this one is perfect. I updated my profile with these stats.
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Post by Mr ~Traptz~ on Aug 14, 2008 19:28:24 GMT -5
Character DetailsName: Nüwa Feng Alias: Goddess Of Death Age: 20 Sex: Female Height: 5'6" Weight: 106 lbs Personality: Nuwa is describe as a serene woman with a noble heart,a woman who is both Bold and Decisive. She is said to be very intelligent, extremely wise, and exquisite beauty and skill in music. She was known to be fair and generous to the people and respectful to others. Nuwa will take to the battlefield in order to preserve her beliefs. An ambitious woman with exquisite beauty who has a calm, even tempered demeanor, but is unwavering and merciless towards her enemies, but this is higly expected for an Empress of a great Empire. Appearance: A beautiful and feminine figure Nuwa is a young, slim and tall woman with long beautiful, white glossy hair with a shade of green at the tips of her hair. She has pale, milky-white skin, a chiseled face and hazel brown eyes. In her hair she wears a Green Hat accompanied by a Golden Crown similar to a Halo, Her Clothes are made of Silk With the embroidering of The Ying & Yang Symbol. In her Upper body she wears a silver breast plate and white gold gloves, with that a short silk dress with a golden sash in front of it, covered by a white and green gown that ends to her ankles, at her feet Nuwa she wears white and gold silk boots that appears to also be high heels, her boots reaches up to her thighs. On those boots where her thighs lies the embroidering of two gold Ying & Yang symbols. Physically, she is a beautiful woman who is tall, slender, and wears revealing dresses accented by fur or silk. Weapon no.1 : Fengshen Rapier & Yanyi Shield A Divine Rapier & Shield for battle named Fengshen Rapier & Yanyi Shield together meaning "Creation Of The Gods". It is a relatively slender, sharply pointed sword, with golden wings at the top of the handle, used mainly for thrusting attacks. Her Shield is made of strong steel, It is round and small but big enough for the use of her protection. On the middle of the shield there is a circle design carved on it. The Shield's lightness and curved center made it excellent for deflecting attacking blades. Such a deflection would leave the attacker open for a rapid counter-attack. The light blades used in conjunction with the shield depended on rapid movements, which meant that a single second was an important advantage. Nuwa uses the shield to hide her sword-hand's position from view, keeping her opponent from guessing her next strike. Weapon no. 2 : Chain Whip The chain whip is heavy but flexible, that is a nine-section whip allowing it to be literally used as a whip to hit, hook and bind an opponent, restrict his/her movement, and to deflect blows from other weapons. The dart is used for slashing or piercing an opponent. Because the whip is flexible, it can be used to strike around obstacles, including an opponent's block. The whip chain can be folded and hidden from view, making it an easy weapon to carry and conceal. One of Nuwa's technique, used to accelerate a spinning chain whip, involves rapidly wrapping and unwrapping the length of the chain around various parts of the body, including the legs, neck and elbows. History:Empress Nüwa is very highly respected since the time of the Xia Dynasty for being the daughter of Lao-Tien-Yeh known as the Jade Emperor & Yaochi Jinmu also knows as The Golden Mother of the Shining Lake. One Day China became engulfed in chaos, In response Nuwa Joined the Kingdom Of Wei to observe whether Cao Cao and/or Cao Pi is really qualified to bring the chaos to an end, with his tyrant-way, that is... Cao Cao only complies to Nuwa because he thinks her suggestions are valid, despite the reasons behind her requests which she refuses to explain to him at first. In battle She uses a Divine Rapier & Shield that was said to bring any men that crossed her 'To The Death' Giving her the alternate nickname "Goddess Of Death". Stats: Str - 60/85 Tac/Int - 85/85 Pol - 70/85 Lea - 85/85 Alright Nuwa, I'll approve you. Just watch the whip thingy.
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Post by Nü Wa on Aug 15, 2008 2:48:37 GMT -5
Thank you, Ok I will watch the whip or maybe edit it from making it sound dubious. Oh! Is it possible for me to to change my history before I post it in the CP area? Everything that I posted in my history was the stuff that I was going to do in the future.
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Post by Dark Narrator on Aug 15, 2008 2:58:42 GMT -5
Sure, go ahead.
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Post by Sun Quan on Aug 16, 2008 23:59:56 GMT -5
Character DetailsName: Shen Feng A.K.A:Patient Tiger Age: 25 Sex:male Height:5’10Weight:185 Appearance: regular look Battle ArmorWeapon 1: Twisted Ox Weapon 2: Head Chopper Personality: Shen Feng is a very kind individual who often is wise in his decision and thinks before he talks. Angering Shen Feng is close to actually being impossible, it is said that even the devil himself is fed up of Shen because of how hard it is to tempt him. If though Shen is a good man at heart, he will do what ever it takes to get his missions complete and may even make harsh decisions to have his expectation met. On the battlefield things do change with him, he is usually sharp and aware of his surroundings and is quick to make effective actionsHistory:not much is known of Shen’s pass, but he was brought up in the martial arts by two masters; one of physical strength, sword skills and martial arts and the other of mental strength, logic and effective pressure thinking. With his two masters, he’s become and great skilled warrior both on and off the battlefield, but he still need more work in his commanding skills. Fighting wise, Shen has gone to random areas and has challenged many swordsmen in combat and has won many then he lost. Of all his death matches, he developed and very deadly attack that he is known for, which is called “Falling claw”. It’s a move where the opponent is drawn open for a crashing chop to the neck, instantly decapitating the opponent. Shen has realized that he must use he’s great skills and join a kingdom that has the strength and will power to end the chaos StatsStr - 85/85 Tac/Int - 85/85 Pol - 45/85 Lea - 85/85
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Post by Dark Narrator on Aug 17, 2008 10:24:19 GMT -5
Change the stats to this:
Stats Str - 85/85 Tac/Int - 85/85 Pol - 45/85 Lea - 85/85
Your lead is at 90 and it has to start at 85 or less.
Welcome and have fun.
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